Re: [openpgp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-openpgp-crypto-refresh-00.txt

Daniel Kahn Gillmor <dkg@fifthhorseman.net> Sat, 06 February 2021 17:08 UTC

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From: Daniel Kahn Gillmor <dkg@fifthhorseman.net>
To: Vincent Breitmoser <look@my.amazin.horse>, Paul Wouters <paul@nohats.ca>
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Subject: Re: [openpgp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-openpgp-crypto-refresh-00.txt
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On Sat 2021-02-06 13:43:51 +0100, Vincent Breitmoser wrote:
> The whitespace of the listing here looks slightly funky, not sure if it's
> intended like that?:
>
> https://tools.ietf.org//rfcdiff?url1=https://tools.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4880.txt&url2=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-openpgp-crypto-refresh-00.txt#part-21

Thanks for noticing that, Vincent.

This looks like an rfcdiff artifact due to how it tries to elide
pagination issues between text/plain versions.

This is in section 5.12, and you can see that section in the published
document in text-ish form (html-wrapped plaintext):

   https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-openpgp-crypto-refresh-00#section-5.12

or in "native" html:

   https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-openpgp-crypto-refresh-01.html#name-user-attribute-packet-tag-1

both of those seem to have the whitespace and the bulleted list looking
reasonable.

> Otherwise, I found no issues 👍️

great!

        --dkg