Re: [openpgp] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-openpgp-03-00: (with COMMENT)

Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> Mon, 04 December 2023 18:04 UTC

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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
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Subject: Re: [openpgp] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-openpgp-03-00: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Éric!

Thanks for the review!

> -----Original Message-----
> From: iesg <iesg-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Éric Vyncke via Datatracker
> Sent: Saturday, November 25, 2023 12:08 PM
> To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Cc: openpgp-chairs@ietf.org; openpgp@ietf.org
> Subject: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-openpgp-03-00: (with
> COMMENT)
> 
> Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
> charter-ietf-openpgp-03-00: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> As a starting note, I am a big fan of PGP for its decentralised approach.
> 
> Please expand PQC, unsure whether "domain separation" is well understood
> (at least not to me), HKP/WKD: suggest to use the acronyms *after* their
> expansions, I like the use of "e.g., use ... as initial input" (except perhaps I
> would have used "perhaps" rather than "e.g."

I expanded PQC, HKP, WKD, and SOP before use.

I put all references to starting point documents into a parenthetical instead of "e.g., use ... as initial input".

Per "domain separation", the precise explanation is defined by the provided hyperlink.

Roman