[openpgp] John Scudder's No Objection on charter-ietf-openpgp-03-00: (with COMMENT)

John Scudder via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 29 November 2023 18:28 UTC

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John Scudder has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-openpgp-03-00: No Objection

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Overall this looks great. I have a couple very small editorial issues you may
want to address.

- I think all the uses of quotation marks other than the final two quoted
things ("Completion" and "parked WG document") are spurious. I realize this is
an exceedingly minor point, but it's a pet peeve.

- I suggest

OLD:
For all work items will required demonstration

NEW:
All work items will require demonstration