Re: [OPSAWG] Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-06

Haoyu Song <haoyu.song@futurewei.com> Fri, 19 February 2021 23:58 UTC

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From: Haoyu Song <haoyu.song@futurewei.com>
To: Alexander Clemm <alex@futurewei.com>, "draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-06
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Hi Alex,

The 07 version of the draft has been submitted, which addresses all of your comments in your last review.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf/
Thanks again for your help on improving the work!

Best regards,
Haoyu
From: Alexander Clemm <alex@futurewei.com>
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Subject: Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-06

Dear Haoyu and coauthors,

Thank you very much for your new revision.  IMHO, the document has greatly improved; you clearly put significant work into it!  I still have a few comments, but those are fewer and in most cases only minor (a few requiring a bit more consideration towards the end).  FWIW, I am enclosing those comments as a marked up PDF of the draft, attached.  While I hope you can accommodate them in a future revision, that should not hold up progressing the document.

Thanks
--- Alex