[OPSAWG]Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-19: (with COMMENT)

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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-19: No Objection

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# Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-19
CC @ekline

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## Comments

### S5.2.5.2

* Can the allocation-type "slaac" be used in here as well?  It explicitly
  called out in another doc, but not mentioned here.

## Nits

### S1.1

* "or even the nature or the services" ->
  "or even the nature of the services"?

### S4.3

* "with a focus the provider" ->
  "with a focus on the provider"?

### S5.2

* "only for test and not for setting," ->
  "only for test and not for service," or something?