Re: [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf [CORRECT]

Haoyu Song <haoyu.song@futurewei.com> Fri, 09 October 2020 17:58 UTC

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From: Haoyu Song <haoyu.song@futurewei.com>
To: Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com>, Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com>, opsawg <opsawg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf [CORRECT]
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf [CORRECT]
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Qin,
Thanks for the suggestion! We have updated the text.

Haoyu

From: Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com>
Sent: Tuesday, September 29, 2020 7:00 PM
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Subject: RE: [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf [CORRECT]

Support for publication.
A quick comment, regarding event triggered data, I think FSM is just one example of how event is modelled, but not the only way.
Suggest to make this clear in the text.
-Qin
From: Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com<mailto:zhoutianran@huawei.com>>
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Subject: WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf [CORRECT]


Sorry for attaching a wrong link to the draft. Please see as follows.



Hi WG,



This email starts a working group last call for draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf.

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf/<https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-opsawg-ntf%2F&data=02%7C01%7Chaoyu.song%40futurewei.com%7C109e9eed453740f3c5ac08d864e4a395%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C637370280450091751&sdata=Ii09tBJyeYOct5VlcKPLntUUr0aPhJkuOP2%2BBiNKgt0%3D&reserved=0>



Please indicate your support or concern for this draft. If you are opposed to the progression of the draft to RFC, please articulate your concern. If you support it, please indicate that you have read the latest version and it is ready for publication in your opinion. As always, review comments and nits are welcome.



The WG LC will end on 9st Oct 2020.



Thanks,

Tianran