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Re: [OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07

li zhenqiang <li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com> Mon, 17 September 2018 04:09 UTC

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From: li zhenqiang <li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com>
To: "Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07
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Dear Mr. Halpern,

Thank you very much for your review and the discussion in the previous mails. The discussion improved this document alot.

Best Regards,
Zhenqiang Li
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li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com

From: Joel Halpern<mailto:jmh@joelhalpern.com>
Date: 2018-09-15 07:21
To: gen-art@ietf.org<mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
CC: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community.all@ietf.org>; ietf@ietf.org<mailto:ietf@ietf.org>; opsawg@ietf.org<mailto:opsawg@ietf.org>
Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

For more information, please see the FAQ at

<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-bgp-community-07
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2018-09-14
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-24
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues:
    While I am still concerned (see my previous reviews) that this may well be
    the wrong answer to the wrong question, the authors have done a good job of
    explaining what they are doing and justifying why in some situations it
    will be useful.   That seems the appropriate standard, and thus the
    document is ready for publication.

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

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