Re: [OPSAWG] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8520 (6295)

Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com> Thu, 24 September 2020 05:12 UTC

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From: Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com>
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Date: Thu, 24 Sep 2020 07:12:00 +0200
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8520 (6295)
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Agreed.  Thanks for spotting it.

> On 23 Sep 2020, at 22:56, Joe Clarke (jclarke) <jclarke@cisco.com> wrote:
> 
> Looks like a straight typo and the correct outlined here makes sense to me.
> 
> Joe
> 
>> On Sep 23, 2020, at 16:09, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>> 
>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8520,
>> "Manufacturer Usage Description Specification".
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> You may review the report below and at:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6295
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> Type: Technical
>> Reported by: Nick Lamb <rat+ietf@tlrmx.org>
>> 
>> Section: 4.1
>> 
>> Original Text
>> -------------
>> For example, if one saw the line "manufacturer" : "flobbidy.example.com",
>> then all Things that registered with a MUD URL that contained flobbity.example.com in its authority section would match.
>> 
>> Corrected Text
>> --------------
>> For example, if one saw the line "manufacturer" : "flobbity.example.com",
>> then all Things that registered with a MUD URL that contained flobbity.example.com in its authority section would match.
>> 
>> Notes
>> -----
>> Taken at face value it implies somehow a MUD Manager knows about a relationship between two different names flobbidy.example.com and flobbity.example.com in an unexplained way, the correction removes this confusion.
>> 
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>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC8520 (draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-25)
>> --------------------------------------
>> Title               : Manufacturer Usage Description Specification
>> Publication Date    : March 2019
>> Author(s)           : E. Lear, R. Droms, D. Romascanu
>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>> Source              : Operations and Management Area Working Group
>> Area                : Operations and Management
>> Stream              : IETF
>> Verifying Party     : IESG
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