Re: [OPSAWG] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8520 (6295)

"Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com> Thu, 24 September 2020 10:54 UTC

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From: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>
To: Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com>, "Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com>
CC: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, Ralph Droms <rdroms@gmail.com>, "dromasca@gmail.com" <dromasca@gmail.com>, "warren@kumari.net" <warren@kumari.net>, "henk.birkholz@sit.fraunhofer.de" <henk.birkholz@sit.fraunhofer.de>, "zhoutianran@huawei.com" <zhoutianran@huawei.com>, "rat+ietf@tlrmx.org" <rat+ietf@tlrmx.org>, "opsawg@ietf.org" <opsawg@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8520 (6295)
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8520 (6295)
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Thanks all for raising/confirming.

Now marked as verified.

Regards,
Rob


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com>
> Sent: 24 September 2020 06:12
> To: Joe Clarke (jclarke) <jclarke@cisco.com>
> Cc: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>rg>; Ralph Droms
> <rdroms@gmail.com>om>; dromasca@gmail.com; warren@kumari.net; Rob Wilton
> (rwilton) <rwilton@cisco.com>om>; henk.birkholz@sit.fraunhofer.de;
> zhoutianran@huawei.com; rat+ietf@tlrmx.org; opsawg@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8520 (6295)
> 
> Agreed.  Thanks for spotting it.
> 
> > On 23 Sep 2020, at 22:56, Joe Clarke (jclarke) <jclarke@cisco.com>
> wrote:
> >
> > Looks like a straight typo and the correct outlined here makes sense to
> me.
> >
> > Joe
> >
> >> On Sep 23, 2020, at 16:09, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-
> editor.org> wrote:
> >>
> >> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8520,
> >> "Manufacturer Usage Description Specification".
> >>
> >> --------------------------------------
> >> You may review the report below and at:
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6295
> >>
> >> --------------------------------------
> >> Type: Technical
> >> Reported by: Nick Lamb <rat+ietf@tlrmx.org>
> >>
> >> Section: 4.1
> >>
> >> Original Text
> >> -------------
> >> For example, if one saw the line "manufacturer" :
> "flobbidy.example.com",
> >> then all Things that registered with a MUD URL that contained
> flobbity.example.com in its authority section would match.
> >>
> >> Corrected Text
> >> --------------
> >> For example, if one saw the line "manufacturer" :
> "flobbity.example.com",
> >> then all Things that registered with a MUD URL that contained
> flobbity.example.com in its authority section would match.
> >>
> >> Notes
> >> -----
> >> Taken at face value it implies somehow a MUD Manager knows about a
> relationship between two different names flobbidy.example.com and
> flobbity.example.com in an unexplained way, the correction removes this
> confusion.
> >>
> >> Instructions:
> >> -------------
> >> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
> >> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
> >> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party
> >> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
> >>
> >> --------------------------------------
> >> RFC8520 (draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-25)
> >> --------------------------------------
> >> Title               : Manufacturer Usage Description Specification
> >> Publication Date    : March 2019
> >> Author(s)           : E. Lear, R. Droms, D. Romascanu
> >> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> >> Source              : Operations and Management Area Working Group
> >> Area                : Operations and Management
> >> Stream              : IETF
> >> Verifying Party     : IESG
> >