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Haoyu Song <haoyu.song@futurewei.com> Thu, 18 February 2021 23:20 UTC

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From: Haoyu Song <haoyu.song@futurewei.com>
To: Alexander Clemm <alex@futurewei.com>, "draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-06
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-06
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Hi Alex，

Thank you very much for your review and your help on progressing it! We’ll revise the draft and submit a new version.

Best regards,
Haoyu

From: Alexander Clemm <alex@futurewei.com>
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Subject: Review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ntf-06

Dear Haoyu and coauthors,

Thank you very much for your new revision.  IMHO, the document has greatly improved; you clearly put significant work into it!  I still have a few comments, but those are fewer and in most cases only minor (a few requiring a bit more consideration towards the end).  FWIW, I am enclosing those comments as a marked up PDF of the draft, attached.  While I hope you can accommodate them in a future revision, that should not hold up progressing the document.

Thanks
--- Alex

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