Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mib-floats-01.txt

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Thu, 02 June 2011 10:22 UTC

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From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>
To: Randy Presuhn <randy_presuhn@mindspring.com>, opsawg@ietf.org
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Hi Randy, 

Thanks for addressing the comments. Please include the changes in the
post-IETFLC version. 

Regards,

Dan 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Randy Presuhn [mailto:randy_presuhn@mindspring.com]
> Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2011 9:52 PM
> To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan); opsawg@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mib-floats-01.txt
> 
> Hi -
> 
> > From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>
> > To: <opsawg@ietf.org>
> > Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2011 4:51 AM
> > Subject: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mib-floats-01.txt
> >
> >
> >
> > Hi,
> >
> > Please find below the AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mib-floats-
> 01.txt.
> > The document is in good shape and I am sending it to IETF Last Call.
> > Please consider the comments below together with the other IETF LC
> > comments.
> 
> Both as editor and as a technical contributor,
> I think all of these items are non-contentious.
> 
> > Technical comments are marked T and Editorial comments are marked E.
> >
> > E1.
> >
> >       mib-2                                 FROM SNMPv2-SMI
> >       TEXTUAL-CONVENTION                    FROM SNMPv2-TC;
> >
> > Add -- RFC 2758 and -- RFC 2759 for each of the imports, so that the
> > source RFC number can be available if the MIB module us used
> extracted
> > from the RFC.
> 
> Fixed in the editor's copy.
> 
> > E2. The name of the IEEE standard referenced in the document is
'IEEE
> > Standard for Floating-Point Arithmetic' and not 'IEEE Standard for
> > Binary Floating-Point Arithmetic' as written in the REFERENCE
clauses
> > and in the Normative References section - see
> > http://ieeexplore.ieee.org/xpls/abs_all.jsp?arnumber=4610935&tag=1
> 
> Also fixed in the editor's copy.
> 
> These changes will show up with the next I-D, which will probably be
at
> the
> close of the last call.
> 
> Randy