Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-03.txt

Hi all,

This version addresses the yangdoctors review and a comment from Joe raised during the last IETF meeting: enhance the readability of the module.

To that aim, we added annotations and reordered some data notes for better clarity. We also made some other edits and fixes to make idnits happy. 

As usual, comments are more than welcome.

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
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> Envoyé : jeudi 14 janvier 2021 11:06
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> Cc : opsawg@ietf.org
> Objet : [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-03.txt
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area
> Working Group WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : A Layer 2/3 VPN Common YANG Model
>         Authors         : Samier Barguil
>                           Oscar Gonzalez de Dios
>                           Mohamed Boucadair
>                           Qin Wu
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common-03.txt
> 	Pages           : 53
> 	Date            : 2021-01-14
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document defines a common YANG module that is meant to be
> reused
>    by various VPN-related modules such as Layer 3 VPN and Layer 2
> VPN
>    network models.
> 
> Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor)
> 
>    Please update these statements within the document with the RFC
>    number to be assigned to this document:
> 
>    o  "This version of this YANG module is part of RFC XXXX;"
> 
>    o  "RFC XXXX: A Layer 2/3 VPN Common YANG Model";
> 
>    o  reference: RFC XXXX
> 
>    Also, please update the "revision" date of the YANG module.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-vpn-common/
> 
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> 03
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
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> 
> 
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