Re: [OPSAWG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7666 (7258)

Jürgen Schönwälder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> Fri, 02 December 2022 06:39 UTC

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Date: Fri, 02 Dec 2022 07:39:23 +0100
From: Jürgen Schönwälder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>
To: Randy Presuhn <randy_presuhn@alumni.stanford.edu>
Cc: Chris Smiley <csmiley@amsl.com>, panda@hongo.wide.ad.jp, mrm@vmware.com, keiichi@iijlab.net, tina.tsou.zouting@huawei.com, opsawg@ietf.org, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
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Indeed.

The more important action though would be to tell IANA...

/js

On Thu, Dec 01, 2022 at 04:01:30PM -0800, Randy Presuhn wrote:
> Hi -
> 
> There *is* an issue - the first two possible values spelled out
> in the DESCRIPTION clause do not match the enumerated SYNTAX
> values' labels.
> 
> Randy
> 
> On 2022-12-01 1:46 PM, Chris Smiley wrote:
> > 
> > Greetings,
> > 
> > FYI - this report has been deleted as junk.
> > 
> > Thank you.
> > 
> > RFC Editor/cs
> > 
> > > On Nov 30, 2022, at 6:26 PM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> > > 
> > > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7666,
> > > "Management Information Base for Virtual Machines Controlled by a Hypervisor".
> > > 
> > > --------------------------------------
> > > You may review the report below and at:
> > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7258
> > > 
> > > --------------------------------------
> > > Type: Editorial
> > > Reported by: Dana Renee Hopkins <unpproductions@gmail.com>
> > > 
> > > Section: 3233702267
> > > 
> > > Original Text
> > > -------------
> > > Search RFCs
> > > number, title, keyword, or author surname
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> > > RFC Editor
> > > RFC Errata
> > > RFC 7666, "Management Information Base for Virtual Machines Controlled by a Hypervisor", October 2015
> > > Source of RFC: opsawg (ops)
> > > Found 1 record.
> > > 
> > > Errata ID: 4710
> > > Status: Verified
> > > Type: Editorial
> > > Publication Format(s) : TEXT
> > > Reported By: jean-marie Kubek
> > > Date Reported: 2016-06-15
> > > Verifier Name: Benoit Claise
> > > Date Verified: 2016-06-17
> > > Section 6.2 IANA MIB says:
> > > 
> > > IANAStorageMediaType ::= TEXTUAL-CONVENTION
> > >        STATUS       current
> > >        DESCRIPTION
> > >                "The media type of a storage device:
> > > 
> > >                unknown(1)     The media type is unknown, e.g., because
> > >                               the implementation failed to obtain the
> > >                               media type from the hypervisor.
> > > 
> > >                other(2)       The media type is other than those
> > >                               defined in this conversion.
> > > It should say:
> > > 
> > > IANAStorageMediaType ::= TEXTUAL-CONVENTION
> > >        STATUS       current
> > >        DESCRIPTION
> > >                "The media type of a storage device:
> > > 
> > >                  other(1)       The media type is other than those
> > >                                 defined in this conversion.
> > > 
> > >                  unknown(2)     The media type is unknown, e.g., because
> > >                                 the implementation failed to obtain the
> > >                                 media type from the hypervisor.
> > > 
> > > Notes:
> > > 
> > > Inversion of other and unknown integer values in the description of the IANAStorageMediaType TEXTUAL-CONVENTION.
> > > 
> > > FIrst referenced at IANA RT as [IANA #913286] Incoherency in IANA-STORAGE-MEDIA-TYPE-MIB
> > > 
> > > Search for errata for other RFCs.
> > > 
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> > > Enclosure
> > > 
> > > Notes
> > > -----
> > > It's not the right document
> > > 
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> > > --------------------------------------
> > > RFC7666 (draft-ietf-opsawg-vmm-mib-04)
> > > --------------------------------------
> > > Title               : Management Information Base for Virtual Machines Controlled by a Hypervisor
> > > Publication Date    : October 2015
> > > Author(s)           : H. Asai, M. MacFaden, J. Schoenwaelder, K. Shima, T. Tsou
> > > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> > > Source              : Operations and Management Area Working Group
> > > Area                : Operations and Management
> > > Stream              : IETF
> > > Verifying Party     : IESG
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