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From: "Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com>
To: opsawg <opsawg@ietf.org>
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Subject: [OPSAWG] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang
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I have completed my first draft of the shepherd write-up of this document.  In the abstract I noticed it says that this document defines “YANG modules” when it only defines “a YANG module” now.  Can text referring to the plural modules be updated?

Also, any other review of the write-up would be appreciated.

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang/shepherdwriteup/

Joe

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