Re: [OPSAWG] is there any work in Ops Area for monitoring network functions?

["Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Linda,
We authors will reflect Tom's comments on the revision.

Thanks.

Best Regards,
Paul

On Wed, Dec 12, 2018 at 1:12 AM Linda Dunbar <[e-mail]>
wrote:

> Tom,
>
> Thank you very much for the review and comments. So there is no duplicated
> work in OpsArea?
>
>
> Authors of the draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model: Can you please
> update the draft per Tom's comments.
>
> Linda.
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: tom petch [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Sent: Tuesday, December 11, 2018 5:22 AM
> To: Linda Dunbar <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]
> Cc: [e-mail]
> Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] is there any work in Ops Area for monitoring network
> functions?
>
> Linda
>
> I looked at the draft and think that it needs some work before it is a
> YANG module:-)
>
> - NMDA conformance is not mentioned
>
> - the reference to RFC2119 is out of date
>
> - the format for tree diagrams is now specified in RFC8340
>
> - YANG import statements lack 'reference' as in
>      import ietf-inet-types {
>        prefix "inet";
>        reference "RFC 6991 - Common YANG Data Types";
>
> - YANG module has no copyright
>
> - YANG module has (almost) no reference statements to tell the user (like
> me)  whereto go to understand it. look, for example, at
> draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang for a module that is well supplied with
> reference statements
>
> - YANG module should reference the RFC from which it comes
>
> - the one and only reference in the YANG module is
>       reference
>          "draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07";
> but the I-D is
>          draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06
> I do not understand
>
> - where you reference an I-D, it needs a Note to the RFC Editor e.g.
>  reference       "draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07";
> becomes
>  reference RFC YYYY "....."
> -- Note to RFC Editor please replace YYYY with the number assigned to
>          "draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring"
>
> - IANA Considerations must be present
>
> - Security Considerations must include the YANG template
>
> HTH:-)
>
> I am not on the I2NSF list.
>
> Tom Petch
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Linda Dunbar" <[e-mail]>
> To: <[e-mail]>
> Cc: <[e-mail]>
> Sent: Wednesday, December 05, 2018 5:27 PM
>
> > OpsaWG:
> >
> > I2NSF WG has a draft on data models (and information model) of
> monitoring network security functions:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-0
> 6
> >
> > It includes data models to retrieve System Alarms, System Events,
> counters, NSF Events/logs, etc.
> >
> > Want to see if there are data models already specified by Ops Area for
> monitoring network functions which might have some common attributes that
> I2NSF can import.
> >
> > Thanks, Linda Dunbar
> >
> > From: Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong [mailto:[e-mail]]
> > Sent: Thursday, November 15, 2018 6:35 PM
> > To: Linda Dunbar
> <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>; Yoav Nir <
> [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
> > Cc: [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>;
> [e-mail]<mailto:skku_secu-brain_all@googlegr
> oups.com>; Sangwon Hyun <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>;
> Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
> <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>>
> > Subject: Request for WG Adoption Call on NSF Monitoring Draft
> >
> > Hi Linda and Yoav,
> > As we discussed the last Bangkok meeting, I have merged the two drafts
> > of Information Model and Data Model for NSF Monitoring into a new
> > draft called
> draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06:
> >
> > - Two Information and Data Model Drafts  .
> > draft-zhang-i2nsf-info-model-monitoring-07
> >  . draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-05
> >
> > - A Merged Data Model Draft
> >  . draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-06
> >  .
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hong-i2nsf-nsf-monitoring-data-model-0
> 6
> >
> > The NSF monitoring is very important to manage the I2NSF security
> service system
> > in a reliable and scalable fashion.
> >
> > Could you start a WG adoption call for this draft?
> >
> > Thanks.
> >
> > Best Regards,
> > Paul
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