[OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mib-floats-01.txt
"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Wed, 01 June 2011 11:51 UTC
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From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>
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Hi, Please find below the AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mib-floats-01.txt. The document is in good shape and I am sending it to IETF Last Call. Please consider the comments below together with the other IETF LC comments. Technical comments are marked T and Editorial comments are marked E. E1. mib-2 FROM SNMPv2-SMI TEXTUAL-CONVENTION FROM SNMPv2-TC; Add -- RFC 2758 and -- RFC 2759 for each of the imports, so that the source RFC number can be available if the MIB module us used extracted from the RFC. E2. The name of the IEEE standard referenced in the document is 'IEEE Standard for Floating-Point Arithmetic' and not 'IEEE Standard for Binary Floating-Point Arithmetic' as written in the REFERENCE clauses and in the Normative References section - see http://ieeexplore.ieee.org/xpls/abs_all.jsp?arnumber=4610935&tag=1 Thanks and Regards, Dan
- [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mib-float… Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
- Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mib-f… Randy Presuhn
- Re: [OPSAWG] AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mib-f… Romascanu, Dan (Dan)