Re: [OPSAWG] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-09

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Wed, 14 April 2021 08:58 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-09
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Mohit, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On 2021-3-20, at 12:24, Mohit Sethi via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Mohit Sethi
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-yang-09
> Reviewer: Mohit Sethi
> Review Date: 2021-03-20
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-29
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: This document defines a TACACS+ YANG module for configuring TACACS+
> clients so that they can use TACACS+ servers as an alternative to RADIUS
> servers or local user configuration.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> Perhaps expand TACACS+ on first usage. The same for FIB. Perhaps add the
> acronym AAA to the first usage of Authentication, Authorization and Accounting
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