Re: [OPSEC] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21.txt

Gyan Mishra <hayabusagsm@gmail.com> Sat, 09 November 2019 07:28 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OPSEC] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21.txt
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Eric

I submitted the shepherd write-up.

I ran the idnits and it found the following obsolete references.  We should
clear that up before we publish it.  I can update my comments on that once
the draft is updated.

Checking references for intended status: Informational
  ----------------------------------------------------------------------------

  -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 2460
     (Obsoleted by RFC 8200)

  -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 3068
     (Obsoleted by RFC 7526)

  -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 3627
     (Obsoleted by RFC 6547)


Thank you


Gyan


On Mon, Nov 4, 2019 at 9:38 AM Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke@cisco.com>
wrote:

> Hello Gyan,
>
> Thank you for reminding the author to post the 'gist' of the changes with
> version -21.
>
> Our OPS AD, Warren "Ace" Kumari,  has kindly reviewed our document and has
> identified more than 70 areas where the text was ambiguous or using bad
> English... No wonder, none of the 4 authors are English-speaking native: it
> is a mix of Estonian (Merike who also speaks German and Russian[1]), one of
> the 22 (?) language of India (KK), German (Enno who also speaks French and
> Spanish) and French (myself also speaking Dutch) __ __ IETF community is
> really diverse !
>
> Thank you very much in advance for finalizing the shepherd write-up
>
> -éric
>
> [1] I can be wrong for Merike BTW but she is quadri-lingual
>
> On 04/11/2019, 15:26, "Gyan Mishra" <hayabusagsm@gmail.com> wrote:
>
>     Hi Eric
>
>     Just checking what the updates are that went in v21 since this
> document is now ready to be published just pending my Shepard writeup which
> I plan to finish this week.
>
>     Thank you
>
>     Gyan
>
>     Sent from my iPhone
>
>     > On Nov 3, 2019, at 4:56 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>     >
>     >
>     > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
>     > This draft is a work item of the Operational Security Capabilities
> for IP Network Infrastructure WG of the IETF.
>     >
>     >        Title           : Operational Security Considerations for
> IPv6 Networks
>     >        Authors         : Eric Vyncke
>     >                          Kiran Kumar Chittimaneni
>     >                          Merike Kaeo
>     >                          Enno Rey
>     >    Filename        : draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21.txt
>     >    Pages           : 52
>     >    Date            : 2019-11-03
>     >
>     > Abstract:
>     >   Knowledge and experience on how to operate IPv4 securely is
>     >   available: whether it is the Internet or an enterprise internal
>     >   network.  However, IPv6 presents some new security challenges.  RFC
>     >   4942 describes the security issues in the protocol but network
>     >   managers also need a more practical, operations-minded document to
>     >   enumerate advantages and/or disadvantages of certain choices.
>     >
>     >   This document analyzes the operational security issues in several
>     >   places of a network (enterprises, service providers and residential
>     >   users) and proposes technical and procedural mitigations
> techniques.
>     >   Some very specific places of a network such as the Internet of
> Things
>     >   are not discussed in this document.
>     >
>     >
>     > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>     > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsec-v6/
>     >
>     > There are also htmlized versions available at:
>     > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21
>     > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21
>     >
>     > A diff from the previous version is available at:
>     > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsec-v6-21
>     >
>     >
>     > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
>     > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>     >
>     > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>     > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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