Re: [OSPF] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC2328 (5041)

"Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com> Tue, 13 June 2017 20:38 UTC

From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
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This editorial errata is correct. Please update it to also correct
instance of “1-Way” to “1-WayReceived” in the text immediately below
figure 13. 
Thanks,
Acee 

On 6/13/17, 4:22 PM, "RFC Errata System" <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:

>The following errata report has been submitted for RFC2328,
>"OSPF Version 2".
>
>--------------------------------------
>You may review the report below and at:
>http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5041
>
>--------------------------------------
>Type: Editorial
>Reported by: Adam Augustyn <brylant@gmail.com>
>
>Section: 10.2
>
>Original Text
>-------------
>1-Way
>    An Hello packet has been received from the neighbor, in
>    which the router is not mentioned.  This indicates that
>    communication with the neighbor is not bidirectional.
>
>Corrected Text
>--------------
>1-WayReceived
>    An Hello packet has been received from the neighbor, in
>    which the router is not mentioned.  This indicates that
>    communication with the neighbor is not bidirectional.
>
>Notes
>-----
>RFC2328 defines The Neighbor state machine and it's states. One of the
>states is defined/named as 1-WayReceived ([Page 95] 10.3.).
>1-WayReceived is also mentioned on page 84 and 98.
>
>Pages 85 and 88 use event 1Way which should be renamed to 1-WayReceived
>for consistency with definition of the state.
>
>[Page 85]
>Event 1-Way forces Init state,
>
>
>[Page 88]
>10.2.  Events causing neighbor state changes
>1-Way
>    An Hello packet has been received from the neighbor, in
>    which the router is not mentioned.  This indicates that
>    communication with the neighbor is not bidirectional.
>
>Instructions:
>-------------
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>
>--------------------------------------
>RFC2328 (no draft string recorded)
>--------------------------------------
>Title               : OSPF Version 2
>Publication Date    : April 1998
>Author(s)           : J. Moy
>Category            : INTERNET STANDARD
>Source              : Open Shortest Path First IGP
>Area                : Routing
>Stream              : IETF
>Verifying Party     : IESG

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