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Re: [OSPF] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC2328 (3644)

Preet DSouza <preet.desouza17@gmail.com> Fri, 07 June 2013 20:35 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OSPF] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC2328 (3644)
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Kindly note that I've made a minor mistake in the RFC errata notes.

It says,

Notes:

section 2.1.2

Page 20, Figure 2 : A sample Autonomous System.

The interfaces Ia and Ib have not been added to the directed graph.
By definition of point-to-point links under OSPF, for serial interfaces
defined by IP addresses,
router RT6 should advertise a stub network to Ib whereas router RT6 should
advertise a stub network to Ia .


It should say,

Notes:

section 2.1.2

Page 20, Figure 2 : A sample Autonomous System.

The interfaces Ia and Ib have not been added to the directed graph.
By definition of point-to-point links under OSPF, for serial interfaces
defined by IP addresses,
router RT6 should advertise a stub network to Ib whereas router
*RT10*should advertise a stub network to Ia .



On Sat, Jun 8, 2013 at 1:59 AM, Preet DSouza <preet.desouza17@gmail.com>wrote:

>     The corrected text should be as under.
>     The additions are noted in bold.
>
>                                    **FROM**
>
>                  |RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|
>                  |1 |2 |3 |4 |5 |6 |7 |8 |9 |10|11|12|N3|N6|N8|N9|
>               ----- ---------------------------------------------
>               RT1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>               RT2|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>               RT3|  |  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>               RT4|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>               RT5|  |  |  |8 |  |6 |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>               RT6|  |  |8 |  |7 |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>               RT7|  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>           *   RT8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>           *   RT9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>           T  RT10|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |  |
>           O  RT11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |
>           *  RT12|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>           *    N1|3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>                N2|  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>                N3|1 |1 |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>                N4|  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>                N6|  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |1 |  |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>                N7|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |4 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>                N8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |2 |  |  |  |  |  |
>                N9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |  |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |
>               N10|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |
>               N11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>               N12|  |  |  |  |8 |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>               N13|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>               N14|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>               N15|  |  |  |  |  |  |9 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>                H1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |10|  |  |  |  |
>                *Ia|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |**
>                Ib|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |*
>
>
> On Sat, Jun 8, 2013 at 1:44 AM, Preet DSouza <preet.desouza17@gmail.com>wrote:
>
>> Hello Acee,
>>
>> I made two additions.
>> The last two rows in the **To** column have been added.
>> They are interfaces  Ia and   Ib  which are represented as stub networks
>> owing to their definition on a point-to-point link between RT6 and RT10
>>
>>
>> On Sat, Jun 8, 2013 at 1:29 AM, Acee Lindem <acee@lindem.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Preet - Can you denote which boxes you changed and why? In its current
>>> state, this errata should be summarily rejected.
>>> Thanks,
>>> Acee
>>> On Jun 7, 2013, at 3:46 PM, RFC Errata System wrote:
>>>
>>> > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC2328,
>>> > "OSPF Version 2".
>>> >
>>> > --------------------------------------
>>> > You may review the report below and at:
>>> > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=2328&eid=3644
>>> >
>>> > --------------------------------------
>>> > Type: Technical
>>> > Reported by: Preet D'Souza <preet.desouza17@gmail.com>
>>> >
>>> > Section: 2.1.2
>>> >
>>> > Original Text
>>> > -------------
>>> >                                       **FROM**
>>> >
>>> >                 |RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|
>>> >                 |1 |2 |3 |4 |5 |6 |7 |8 |9 |10|11|12|N3|N6|N8|N9|
>>> >              ----- ---------------------------------------------
>>> >              RT1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>> >              RT2|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>> >              RT3|  |  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>> >              RT4|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>> >              RT5|  |  |  |8 |  |6 |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              RT6|  |  |8 |  |7 |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              RT7|  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>>> >          *   RT8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>>> >          *   RT9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>>> >          T  RT10|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |  |
>>> >          O  RT11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |
>>> >          *  RT12|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>>> >          *    N1|3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N2|  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N3|1 |1 |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N4|  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N6|  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |1 |  |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N7|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |4 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |2 |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |  |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              N10|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              N11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              N12|  |  |  |  |8 |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              N13|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              N14|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              N15|  |  |  |  |  |  |9 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               H1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |10|  |  |  |  |
>>> >
>>> >
>>> > Corrected Text
>>> > --------------
>>> >                                    **FROM**
>>> >
>>> >                 |RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|
>>> >                 |1 |2 |3 |4 |5 |6 |7 |8 |9 |10|11|12|N3|N6|N8|N9|
>>> >              ----- ---------------------------------------------
>>> >              RT1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>> >              RT2|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>> >              RT3|  |  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>> >              RT4|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>> >              RT5|  |  |  |8 |  |6 |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              RT6|  |  |8 |  |7 |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              RT7|  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>>> >          *   RT8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>>> >          *   RT9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>>> >          T  RT10|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |  |
>>> >          O  RT11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |
>>> >          *  RT12|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>>> >          *    N1|3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N2|  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N3|1 |1 |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N4|  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N6|  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |1 |  |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N7|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |4 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |2 |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               N9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |  |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              N10|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              N11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              N12|  |  |  |  |8 |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              N13|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              N14|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >              N15|  |  |  |  |  |  |9 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               H1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |10|  |  |  |  |
>>> >               Ia|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >               Ib|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>> >
>>> > Notes
>>> > -----
>>> > section 2.1.2
>>> >
>>> > Page 20, Figure 2 : A sample Autonomous System.
>>> >
>>> > The interfaces   Ia  and Ib  have not been added to the directed graph.
>>> > By definition of point-to-point links under OSPF, for serial
>>> interfaces defined by IP addresses,
>>> > router RT6 should advertise a stub network to Ib whereas router RT6
>>> should advertise a stub network to Ia .
>>> >
>>> > Instructions:
>>> > -------------
>>> > This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
>>> > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
>>> > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
>>> > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>>> >
>>> > --------------------------------------
>>> > RFC2328 (no draft string recorded)
>>> > --------------------------------------
>>> > Title               : OSPF Version 2
>>> > Publication Date    : April 1998
>>> > Author(s)           : J. Moy
>>> > Category            : INTERNET STANDARD
>>> > Source              : Open Shortest Path First IGP
>>> > Area                : Routing
>>> > Stream              : IETF
>>> > Verifying Party     : IESG
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>>>
>>
>

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