Re: [OSPF] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-23: (with COMMENT)

Suresh Krishnan <Suresh@kaloom.com> Thu, 14 December 2017 17:26 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OSPF] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-23: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Peter,
  Thanks a lot for addressing my comments. Your changes look good to me.

Regards
Suresh

On Dec 14, 2017, at 7:37 AM, Peter Psenak <ppsenak@cisco.com<mailto:ppsenak@cisco.com>> wrote:

Hi Suresh,

please see inline:

On 13/12/17 22:15 , Suresh Krishnan wrote:
Suresh Krishnan has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-23: No Objection

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* It would be good to clarify that this document is intended for OSPFv2 only
(probably in the title and/or abstract).

I changed the text in the abstract, which now says:

"This draft describes the OSPFv2 extensions required for Segment Routing."

It may also be worthwhile for the
document and/or the Shepherd writeup to explain why the WG decided to separate
the OSPFv3 extensions into a different document.

OSPFv3 SR extensions are based on the
draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-lsa-extend, which is OSPFv3 specific. That's why WG decided to use a separate document to describe OSPFv3 SR extensions.


* I think RFC2328 should be a Normative Reference and not an informative
reference.

done.

Please see the updated version at:
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions-24.txt

thanks,
Peter


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