Re: [OSPF] Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-12: (with COMMENT)

Shraddha Hegde <shraddha@juniper.net> Thu, 18 January 2018 18:32 UTC

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From: Shraddha Hegde <shraddha@juniper.net>
To: Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-12: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [OSPF] Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-12: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Eric,

Introduction section does have a brief description and refers to 7.1 for detailed description of the use case. Moving detailed use case description to introduction section will make it cluttered.
Also there are other applications apart from 7.1 which also have a brief description in the 
Introduction and refer to application section for detailed description.

Rgds
Shraddha

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Subject: Eric Rescorla's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-12: (with COMMENT)

Eric Rescorla has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ospf-link-overload-12: No Objection

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I think this document would be clearer if the example in S 7.1 were in the intro. I was scratching my head a bit at the beginning and then got to 7.1 and it made more sense.