Re: [OSPF] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC2328 (3644)

Preet DSouza <preet.desouza17@gmail.com> Fri, 07 June 2013 20:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OSPF] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC2328 (3644)
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    The corrected text should be as under.
    The additions are noted in bold.

                                   **FROM**

                 |RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|
                 |1 |2 |3 |4 |5 |6 |7 |8 |9 |10|11|12|N3|N6|N8|N9|
              ----- ---------------------------------------------
              RT1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
              RT2|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
              RT3|  |  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
              RT4|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
              RT5|  |  |  |8 |  |6 |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
              RT6|  |  |8 |  |7 |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
              RT7|  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
          *   RT8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
          *   RT9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
          T  RT10|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |  |
          O  RT11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |
          *  RT12|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
          *    N1|3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
               N2|  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
               N3|1 |1 |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
               N4|  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
               N6|  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |1 |  |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
               N7|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |4 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
               N8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |2 |  |  |  |  |  |
               N9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |  |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |
              N10|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |
              N11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
              N12|  |  |  |  |8 |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
              N13|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
              N14|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
              N15|  |  |  |  |  |  |9 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
               H1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |10|  |  |  |  |
               *Ia|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |**
               Ib|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |*


On Sat, Jun 8, 2013 at 1:44 AM, Preet DSouza <preet.desouza17@gmail.com>wrote:

> Hello Acee,
>
> I made two additions.
> The last two rows in the **To** column have been added.
> They are interfaces  Ia and   Ib  which are represented as stub networks
> owing to their definition on a point-to-point link between RT6 and RT10
>
>
> On Sat, Jun 8, 2013 at 1:29 AM, Acee Lindem <acee@lindem.com> wrote:
>
>> Preet - Can you denote which boxes you changed and why? In its current
>> state, this errata should be summarily rejected.
>> Thanks,
>> Acee
>> On Jun 7, 2013, at 3:46 PM, RFC Errata System wrote:
>>
>> > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC2328,
>> > "OSPF Version 2".
>> >
>> > --------------------------------------
>> > You may review the report below and at:
>> > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=2328&eid=3644
>> >
>> > --------------------------------------
>> > Type: Technical
>> > Reported by: Preet D'Souza <preet.desouza17@gmail.com>
>> >
>> > Section: 2.1.2
>> >
>> > Original Text
>> > -------------
>> >                                       **FROM**
>> >
>> >                 |RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|
>> >                 |1 |2 |3 |4 |5 |6 |7 |8 |9 |10|11|12|N3|N6|N8|N9|
>> >              ----- ---------------------------------------------
>> >              RT1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>> >              RT2|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>> >              RT3|  |  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>> >              RT4|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>> >              RT5|  |  |  |8 |  |6 |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >              RT6|  |  |8 |  |7 |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >              RT7|  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>> >          *   RT8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>> >          *   RT9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>> >          T  RT10|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |  |
>> >          O  RT11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |
>> >          *  RT12|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>> >          *    N1|3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N2|  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N3|1 |1 |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N4|  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N6|  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |1 |  |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N7|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |4 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |2 |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |  |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |
>> >              N10|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |
>> >              N11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >              N12|  |  |  |  |8 |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >              N13|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >              N14|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >              N15|  |  |  |  |  |  |9 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               H1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |10|  |  |  |  |
>> >
>> >
>> > Corrected Text
>> > --------------
>> >                                    **FROM**
>> >
>> >                 |RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|
>> >                 |1 |2 |3 |4 |5 |6 |7 |8 |9 |10|11|12|N3|N6|N8|N9|
>> >              ----- ---------------------------------------------
>> >              RT1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>> >              RT2|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>> >              RT3|  |  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>> >              RT4|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>> >              RT5|  |  |  |8 |  |6 |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >              RT6|  |  |8 |  |7 |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >              RT7|  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>> >          *   RT8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>> >          *   RT9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>> >          T  RT10|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |  |
>> >          O  RT11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |
>> >          *  RT12|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>> >          *    N1|3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N2|  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N3|1 |1 |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N4|  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N6|  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |1 |  |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N7|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |4 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |2 |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               N9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |  |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |
>> >              N10|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |
>> >              N11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >              N12|  |  |  |  |8 |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >              N13|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >              N14|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >              N15|  |  |  |  |  |  |9 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               H1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |10|  |  |  |  |
>> >               Ia|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >               Ib|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>> >
>> > Notes
>> > -----
>> > section 2.1.2
>> >
>> > Page 20, Figure 2 : A sample Autonomous System.
>> >
>> > The interfaces   Ia  and Ib  have not been added to the directed graph.
>> > By definition of point-to-point links under OSPF, for serial interfaces
>> defined by IP addresses,
>> > router RT6 should advertise a stub network to Ib whereas router RT6
>> should advertise a stub network to Ia .
>> >
>> > Instructions:
>> > -------------
>> > This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
>> > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
>> > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
>> > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>> >
>> > --------------------------------------
>> > RFC2328 (no draft string recorded)
>> > --------------------------------------
>> > Title               : OSPF Version 2
>> > Publication Date    : April 1998
>> > Author(s)           : J. Moy
>> > Category            : INTERNET STANDARD
>> > Source              : Open Shortest Path First IGP
>> > Area                : Routing
>> > Stream              : IETF
>> > Verifying Party     : IESG
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