Re: [OSPF] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC2328 (3644)

Preet DSouza <preet.desouza17@gmail.com> Fri, 07 June 2013 20:49 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OSPF] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC2328 (3644)
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Please refer to RFC errata ID 3645 for the corrected report which has been
submitted.


On Sat, Jun 8, 2013 at 2:05 AM, Preet DSouza <preet.desouza17@gmail.com>wrote:

> Kindly note that I've made a minor mistake in the RFC errata notes.
>
> It says,
>
> Notes:
>
> section 2.1.2
>
> Page 20, Figure 2 : A sample Autonomous System.
>
> The interfaces Ia and Ib have not been added to the directed graph.
> By definition of point-to-point links under OSPF, for serial interfaces
> defined by IP addresses,
> router RT6 should advertise a stub network to Ib whereas router RT6 should
> advertise a stub network to Ia .
>
>
> It should say,
>
> Notes:
>
> section 2.1.2
>
> Page 20, Figure 2 : A sample Autonomous System.
>
> The interfaces Ia and Ib have not been added to the directed graph.
> By definition of point-to-point links under OSPF, for serial interfaces
> defined by IP addresses,
> router RT6 should advertise a stub network to Ib whereas router *RT10*should advertise a stub network to Ia .
>
>
>
>
> On Sat, Jun 8, 2013 at 1:59 AM, Preet DSouza <preet.desouza17@gmail.com>wrote:
>
>>     The corrected text should be as under.
>>     The additions are noted in bold.
>>
>>                                    **FROM**
>>
>>                  |RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|
>>                  |1 |2 |3 |4 |5 |6 |7 |8 |9 |10|11|12|N3|N6|N8|N9|
>>               ----- ---------------------------------------------
>>               RT1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>               RT2|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>               RT3|  |  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>               RT4|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>               RT5|  |  |  |8 |  |6 |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>               RT6|  |  |8 |  |7 |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>               RT7|  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>>           *   RT8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>>           *   RT9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>>           T  RT10|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |  |
>>           O  RT11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |
>>           *  RT12|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>>           *    N1|3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>                N2|  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>                N3|1 |1 |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>                N4|  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>                N6|  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |1 |  |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>                N7|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |4 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>                N8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |2 |  |  |  |  |  |
>>                N9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |  |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |
>>               N10|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |
>>               N11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>               N12|  |  |  |  |8 |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>               N13|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>               N14|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>               N15|  |  |  |  |  |  |9 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>                H1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |10|  |  |  |  |
>>                *Ia|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |**
>>                Ib|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |*
>>
>>
>> On Sat, Jun 8, 2013 at 1:44 AM, Preet DSouza <preet.desouza17@gmail.com>wrote:
>>
>>> Hello Acee,
>>>
>>> I made two additions.
>>> The last two rows in the **To** column have been added.
>>> They are interfaces  Ia and   Ib  which are represented as stub networks
>>> owing to their definition on a point-to-point link between RT6 and RT10
>>>
>>>
>>> On Sat, Jun 8, 2013 at 1:29 AM, Acee Lindem <acee@lindem.com> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Preet - Can you denote which boxes you changed and why? In its current
>>>> state, this errata should be summarily rejected.
>>>> Thanks,
>>>> Acee
>>>> On Jun 7, 2013, at 3:46 PM, RFC Errata System wrote:
>>>>
>>>> > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC2328,
>>>> > "OSPF Version 2".
>>>> >
>>>> > --------------------------------------
>>>> > You may review the report below and at:
>>>> > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=2328&eid=3644
>>>> >
>>>> > --------------------------------------
>>>> > Type: Technical
>>>> > Reported by: Preet D'Souza <preet.desouza17@gmail.com>
>>>> >
>>>> > Section: 2.1.2
>>>> >
>>>> > Original Text
>>>> > -------------
>>>> >                                       **FROM**
>>>> >
>>>> >                 |RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|
>>>> >                 |1 |2 |3 |4 |5 |6 |7 |8 |9 |10|11|12|N3|N6|N8|N9|
>>>> >              ----- ---------------------------------------------
>>>> >              RT1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>>> >              RT2|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>>> >              RT3|  |  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>>> >              RT4|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>>> >              RT5|  |  |  |8 |  |6 |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              RT6|  |  |8 |  |7 |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              RT7|  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>>>> >          *   RT8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>>>> >          *   RT9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>>>> >          T  RT10|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |  |
>>>> >          O  RT11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |
>>>> >          *  RT12|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>>>> >          *    N1|3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N2|  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N3|1 |1 |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N4|  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N6|  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |1 |  |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N7|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |4 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |2 |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |  |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              N10|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              N11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              N12|  |  |  |  |8 |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              N13|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              N14|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              N15|  |  |  |  |  |  |9 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               H1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |10|  |  |  |  |
>>>> >
>>>> >
>>>> > Corrected Text
>>>> > --------------
>>>> >                                    **FROM**
>>>> >
>>>> >                 |RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|RT|
>>>> >                 |1 |2 |3 |4 |5 |6 |7 |8 |9 |10|11|12|N3|N6|N8|N9|
>>>> >              ----- ---------------------------------------------
>>>> >              RT1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>>> >              RT2|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>>> >              RT3|  |  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>>> >              RT4|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |  |
>>>> >              RT5|  |  |  |8 |  |6 |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              RT6|  |  |8 |  |7 |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              RT7|  |  |  |  |6 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>>>> >          *   RT8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |  |  |
>>>> >          *   RT9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>>>> >          T  RT10|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |  |
>>>> >          O  RT11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |0 |
>>>> >          *  RT12|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |0 |
>>>> >          *    N1|3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N2|  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N3|1 |1 |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N4|  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N6|  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |1 |  |1 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N7|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |4 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N8|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |2 |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               N9|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |1 |  |1 |1 |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              N10|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |2 |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              N11|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |3 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              N12|  |  |  |  |8 |  |2 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              N13|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              N14|  |  |  |  |8 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >              N15|  |  |  |  |  |  |9 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               H1|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |10|  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               Ia|  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |5 |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >               Ib|  |  |  |  |  |7 |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |  |
>>>> >
>>>> > Notes
>>>> > -----
>>>> > section 2.1.2
>>>> >
>>>> > Page 20, Figure 2 : A sample Autonomous System.
>>>> >
>>>> > The interfaces   Ia  and Ib  have not been added to the directed
>>>> graph.
>>>> > By definition of point-to-point links under OSPF, for serial
>>>> interfaces defined by IP addresses,
>>>> > router RT6 should advertise a stub network to Ib whereas router RT6
>>>> should advertise a stub network to Ia .
>>>> >
>>>> > Instructions:
>>>> > -------------
>>>> > This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
>>>> > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
>>>> > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
>>>> > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>>>> >
>>>> > --------------------------------------
>>>> > RFC2328 (no draft string recorded)
>>>> > --------------------------------------
>>>> > Title               : OSPF Version 2
>>>> > Publication Date    : April 1998
>>>> > Author(s)           : J. Moy
>>>> > Category            : INTERNET STANDARD
>>>> > Source              : Open Shortest Path First IGP
>>>> > Area                : Routing
>>>> > Stream              : IETF
>>>> > Verifying Party     : IESG
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