Re: [OSPF] Working group last call on draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time

[Greg Mirsky <[e-mail]>]

Hi Les,
thank you for your patience and apologies for missing it.
Diff and the update been attached.

Regards,
Greg

On Tue, Jan 31, 2017 at 5:07 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <[e-mail]
> wrote:

> Greg –
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>
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> Almost…
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> Please change the title of Section 7.5 to “IS-IS RTM Capability sub-TLV”.
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> Please change the title of Table 5 to “IS-IS RTM Capability sub-TLV
> Registry Description”.
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>
> The common point being since this is not exclusively for TLV 22 we do not
> want to say “for TLV 22”.
>
> Thanx.
>
>
>
>     Les
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> *From:* Greg Mirsky [mailto:[e-mail]]
> *Sent:* Monday, January 30, 2017 11:43 PM
>
> *To:* Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
> *Cc:* Loa Andersson; [e-mail]; TEAS WG; [e-mail]; Isis-wg;
> [e-mail]; [e-mail]; TEAS
> WG Chairs; [e-mail]; [e-mail]
> *Subject:* Re: [OSPF] Working group last call on
> draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time
>
>
>
> Hi Les,
>
> many thanks for your the most detailed suggestions. Hope I've it right.
>
>
>
> Regards,
>
> Greg
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>
>
> On Mon, Jan 30, 2017 at 11:04 PM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <
> [e-mail]> wrote:
>
> Greg –
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>
>
> Thanx for the quick turnaround.
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>
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> Section 4.5 (revised text)
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>    The capability to support RTM on a particular link (interface) is
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>    advertised in a new sub-TLV which may be included in TLVs advertising
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>    Intemediate System (IS) Reachability on a specific link (TLVs 22, 23,
> 222, and 223).
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>
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>    The format for the RTM Capabilities sub-TLV is presented in Figure 5
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>      0                   1                   2
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>      0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 ...
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>     +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+...
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>     |      Type     |     Length    | RTM |              ...
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>     +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+...
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>    Figure 5: RTM Capability sub-TLV
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> … (Remainder unchanged)
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> Section 7.5 (revised text)
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> 7.5.  IS-IS RTM Capability sub-TLV
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>    IANA is requested to assign a new Type for RTM capability sub-TLV
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>    from the Sub-TLVs for TLVs 22, 23, 141, 222, and 223 registry as
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>    follows:
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>     +------+-------------+----+----+-----+-----+-----+---------------+
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>     | Type | Description | 22 | 23 | 141 | 222 | 223 | Reference     |
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>     +------+-------------+----+----+-----+-----+-----+---------------+
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>     | TBA3 |     RTM      | y  | y  | n   | y   | y   | This document |
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>     |           | Capability |      |     |      |       |
> |                                |
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>     +------+-------------+----+----+-----+-----+-----+---------------+
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>              Table 5: IS-IS RTM Capability sub-TLV Registry Description
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> Thanx.
>
>
>
>     Les
>
>
>
> *From:* Greg Mirsky [mailto:[e-mail]]
> *Sent:* Monday, January 30, 2017 10:36 PM
> *To:* Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
> *Cc:* Loa Andersson; [e-mail]; TEAS WG; [e-mail]; Isis-wg;
> [e-mail]; [e-mail]; TEAS
> WG Chairs; [e-mail]; [e-mail]
> *Subject:* Re: [OSPF] Working group last call on
> draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time
>
>
>
> Hi Les,
>
> attached are diff and the updated version -14. Would be much obliged to
> hear from you if the updates are according to your suggestions and address
> your comments.
>
>
>
> Kind regards,
>
> Greg
>
>
>
>
>
> On Mon, Jan 30, 2017 at 1:11 PM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) <
> [e-mail]> wrote:
>
> Loa -
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> The change for IS-IS encoding to utilize a sub-TLV of TLV 22 et al to
> advertise RTM capability is a better solution than the previous proposal
> and this has my support.
>
> However, there are some details as regards the proposed sub-TLV that
> should be revised.
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>
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> 1)Rather than use a fixed 16 bit field for the flags I suggest you utilize
> the encoding style introduced in RFC 7794 (see Section 2.1) which allows
> for a variable length flags field. This addresses two issues:
>
>
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>    o You need never worry that the size of the flags field will be too
> small for future extensions
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>    o It minimizes the number of bytes required to be sent
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> The latter point is something IS-IS has always been more conservative
> about than OSPF because of the fixed size of an LSP set which can be
> advertised by a single router.
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>
>
> 2)In the IANA considerations you have limited the sub-TLV to being used in
> TLV 22 only, but there is no reason to do so. This does not allow MT to be
> supported and it needlessly prevents use of the sub-TLV by the RFC 5311
> extensions (however unpopular those may be). I can understand why the
> sub-TLV may not be useful in TLV 141, therefore I suggest the table in
> Section 7.5 be revised to be:
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>     | Type | Description | 22 | 23 | 141 | 222 | 223 | Reference
> |
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>    +------+-------------+----+----+-----+-----+-----+---------------+
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>   | TBA3 |    RTM       | y  | y  | n   | y   | y   | This document
> |
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>     +------+-------------+----+----+-----+-----+-----+---------------+
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>
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> i.e. "y" for all but TLV 141 (in case the ASCII art doesn't translate well
> in your mailer).
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> You should also remove the reference to RFC 5305 in Section 4.5 as it is
> too limiting. Simply referencing the IANA registry http://www.iana.org/
> assignments/isis-tlv-codepoints/isis-tlv-codepoints.xhtml#isis-tlv-
> codepoints-22-23-141-222-223 should be sufficient. All necessary
> references can be found there.
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>
>
> 3)An editorial correction:
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> Introduction 3rd paragraph:
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> s/ Althugh/ Although
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>    Les
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>
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> > -----Original Message-----
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> > From: OSPF [mailto:[e-mail]] On Behalf Of Loa Andersson
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> > Sent: Monday, January 30, 2017 8:02 AM
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> > To: [e-mail]; TEAS WG; [e-mail]; Isis-wg
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> > Cc: [e-mail]; [e-mail];
> TEAS
>
> > WG Chairs; [e-mail]; [e-mail]
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> > Subject: [OSPF] Working group last call on draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time
>
> >
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> > Working Groups,
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> >
>
> > This is to initiate a two week working group last call in four working
> groups on
>
> > draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-13.
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> >
>
> > The MPLS working group has done an earlier working group last call and a
>
> > request for publication has been made.
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> >
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> > The changes to the document were such that we decided to do a new
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> > working group last call and extend it to MPLS, TEAS, OSPF and IS-IS.
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> >
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> > There are three major changes between the version of the document for
>
> > which publication was requested are:
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> >
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> > (1) that section 7 " One-step Clock and Two-step Clock Modes" has been
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> >      moved up to become section 2.1.
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> > (2) that a sub-TLV for TLV 22 instead of TLV 251 is used to RTM
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> >      Capability when IS-IS used advertise RTM capabilities
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> > (3) BGP-LS has been added as a RTM capability advertisement method
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> >
>
> > A side-by-side diff between version -12 and -13 is available at:
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> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-13
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> >
>
> > Please send your comments to the mpls wg mailing list ([e-mail])
> if
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> > you are not subscribed to the mpls wg list, send to "your own"
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> > working group mailing list, and we'll make sure they are posted to the
> MPLS
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> > wg list.
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> >
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> > There were one IPR disclosure against this document.
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> >
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> > All the authors and contributors have stated on the working group
> mailing list
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> > that they are not aware of any other IPRs that relates to this document.
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> >
>
> > This working group last call ends February 13, 2017.
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> >
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> >
>
> > /Loa
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> > MPLS wg co-chairs
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> > --
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> >
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> >
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> > Loa Andersson                        email: [e-mail]
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> > Senior MPLS Expert                          [e-mail]
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> >
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