Re: [OSPF] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-lsa-extend-21: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 24 January 2018 03:53 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OSPF] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-lsa-extend-21: (with COMMENT)
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> On Jan 23, 2018, at 9:18 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) <acee@cisco.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Ben,
> 
> 

[…]

>    ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>    COMMENT:
>    ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
>    -1.1: There are instances of lower case 2119 keywords. Please consider using
>    the boilerplate from RFC 8174.
> 
> This is clearly the intent. This change will be in the -22 version with RFC 8174 as a normative reference.
> 
> 
> 1.1.  Requirements notation
> 
>   The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
>   "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and
>   "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP
>   14 [RFC2119] [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all
>   capitals, as shown here.
> 

Thanks!

Ben.