[OSPF] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC2328 (5041)

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Subject: [OSPF] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC2328 (5041)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC2328,
"OSPF Version 2".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5041

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Adam Augustyn <brylant@gmail.com>

Section: 10.2

Original Text
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1-Way
    An Hello packet has been received from the neighbor, in
    which the router is not mentioned.  This indicates that
    communication with the neighbor is not bidirectional.

Corrected Text
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1-WayReceived
    An Hello packet has been received from the neighbor, in
    which the router is not mentioned.  This indicates that
    communication with the neighbor is not bidirectional.

Notes
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RFC2328 defines The Neighbor state machine and it's states. One of the states is defined/named as 1-WayReceived ([Page 95] 10.3.).
1-WayReceived is also mentioned on page 84 and 98.

Pages 85 and 88 use event 1Way which should be renamed to 1-WayReceived for consistency with definition of the state.

[Page 85]
Event 1-Way forces Init state,


[Page 88]
10.2.  Events causing neighbor state changes 
1-Way
    An Hello packet has been received from the neighbor, in
    which the router is not mentioned.  This indicates that
    communication with the neighbor is not bidirectional.

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RFC2328 (no draft string recorded)
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Title               : OSPF Version 2
Publication Date    : April 1998
Author(s)           : J. Moy
Category            : INTERNET STANDARD
Source              : Open Shortest Path First IGP
Area                : Routing
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG