[OSPF] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC2328 (4023)

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Subject: [OSPF] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC2328 (4023)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC2328,
"OSPF Version 2".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=2328&eid=4023

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Alexander Okonnikov <alexander.okonnikov@gmail.com>

Section: 12.4.1

Original Text
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o Otherwise, the link descriptions added to the router-LSA
depend on the OSPF interface type. Link descriptions
used for point-to-point interfaces are specified in
Section 12.4.1.1, for virtual links in Section 12.4.1.2,
for broadcast and NBMA interfaces in 12.4.1.3, and for
Point-to-MultiPoint interfaces in 12.4.1.4.

Corrected Text
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o Otherwise, the link descriptions added to the router-LSA
depend on the OSPF interface type. Link descriptions
used for point-to-point interfaces are specified in
Section 12.4.1.1, for broadcast and NBMA interfaces in 12.4.1.2,
for virtual links in Section 12.4.1.3, and for 
Point-to-MultiPoint interfaces in 12.4.1.4.

Notes
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Incorrect references.

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RFC2328 (no draft string recorded)
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Title               : OSPF Version 2
Publication Date    : April 1998
Author(s)           : J. Moy
Category            : INTERNET STANDARD
Source              : Open Shortest Path First IGP
Area                : Routing
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG