[P2PSIP] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-p2psip-concepts-08: (with COMMENT)

["Ben Campbell" <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-p2psip-concepts-08: Yes

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COMMENT:
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Thanks for doing this. I wish more of our protocols had high-level
concept descriptions like this.

- 1, first paragraph:
I was slightly surprised not to see the word "rendezvous" turn up here.
It's not critical, but it's a term that has meaning to a lot of
"conventional SIP " people.

- 2.2, last paragraph:
While I assume the client in the first sentence is the conventional SIP
client mentioned further down the paragraph, the initial paragraph
structure led me to expect you to call the special peer offering the SIP
registrar service a "client".

- 2.5, first paragraph:
consider expanding "zeroconf" to "zero configuration"

-6: I’m not going to push the matter this late in the process, but there
might have been an opportunity to describe the security concepts of
p2psip at a similar level of detail.