Re: [P2PSIP] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-p2psip-concepts-07

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 14 January 2016 19:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [P2PSIP] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-p2psip-concepts-07
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Great, thank you.

> On Jan 14, 2016, at 10:39 AM, David Bryan <dbryan@ethernot.org> wrote:
> 
> Thanks for the note -- quite soon. Between end of semester, holiday travel, and now start of the semester there was no time, but things have cleared up and it is back on my list. 
> 
> David
> 
> On Thu, Jan 14, 2016 at 10:11 AM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in <mailto:alissa@cooperw.in>> wrote:
> Hi David,
> 
> Do you have an estimate for when this will be completed?
> 
> Thanks,
> Alissa
> 
>> On Nov 25, 2015, at 7:55 PM, David Bryan <dbryan@ethernot.org <mailto:dbryan@ethernot.org>> wrote:
>> 
>> Thank you very much for the review and comments.
>> 
>> I will look over the comments, and revise shortly.
>> 
>> On Nov 25, 2015 4:58 PM, "Alissa Cooper" <alissa@cooperw.in <mailto:alissa@cooperw.in>> wrote:
>> I have reviewed this document in preparation for IETF last call. There are a few edits that need to be made before this document can be last-called:
>> 
>> 1) The document needs a security considerations section. It is perfectly fine if this section mostly points to the security considerations of the other p2psip documents, but it needs to be there.
>> 
>> 2) Section 3.5 and Section 7 have text marked as “OPEN ISSUE.” These need to be resolved.
>> 
>> 3) Section 1 should be deleted.
>> 
>> 
>> While you’re making changes, please address the following:
>> 
>> 4) Fix the ID nits.
>> 
>> 5) I think Section 3.5 should reference RFC 6762 and 6763 rather than Bonjour.
>> 
>> 6) The Wikipedia references in Section 5 and 6 don’t really seem appropriate and don’t add much value, so I would suggest deleting them.
>> 
>> 7) References to “the RELOAD base draft” should not call it a draft and should reference the RFC.
>> 
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> Alissa
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