Re: [P2PSIP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-08.txt

Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Thu, 12 September 2013 12:26 UTC

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Subject: Re: [P2PSIP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-08.txt
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Hi,

the new revision still has the same problem:

http://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-09.txt

  == Unused Reference: 'I-D.ietf-p2psip-concepts' is defined on line
564, but no explicit reference was found in the text

Please, remove that reference in a new revision of the draft. Please,
make sure the draft passes ID nits.

Thanks,

Gonzalo

On 15/07/2013 10:16 AM, Zongning wrote:
> Hi, Gonzalo,
> 
> It should be removed. My apologies!
> I will fix it in next revision.
> 
> -Ning
> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: p2psip-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:p2psip-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
>> Gonzalo Camarillo
>> Sent: Monday, July 15, 2013 3:04 PM
>> To: p2psip@ietf.org
>> Subject: Re: [P2PSIP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-08.txt
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>> this revision does not seem to reference the concepts draft any longer
>> but still has the draft under Informational References.
>>
>> Cheers,
>>
>> Gonzalo
>>
>> On 15/07/2013 3:52 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>>
>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>>>  This draft is a work item of the Peer-to-Peer Session Initiation Protocol
>> Working Group of the IETF.
>>>
>>> 	Title           : An extension to RELOAD to support Relay Peer Routing
>>> 	Author(s)       : Ning Zong
>>>                           Xingfeng Jiang
>>>                           Roni Even
>>>                           Yunfei Zhang
>>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-08.txt
>>> 	Pages           : 14
>>> 	Date            : 2013-07-14
>>>
>>> Abstract:
>>>    This document proposes an optional extension to RELOAD to support
>>>    relay peer routing mode.  RELOAD recommends symmetric recursive
>>>    routing for routing messages.  The new optional extension provides a
>>>    shorter route for responses reducing the overhead on intermediate
>>>    peers and describes the potential use cases where this extension can
>>>    be used.
>>>
>>>
>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr
>>>
>>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-08
>>>
>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-08
>>>
>>>
>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>>
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