Re: [P2PSIP] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-p2psip-concepts-07

Hi David,

Do you have an estimate for when this will be completed?

Thanks,
Alissa

> On Nov 25, 2015, at 7:55 PM, David Bryan <dbryan@ethernot.org> wrote:
> 
> Thank you very much for the review and comments.
> 
> I will look over the comments, and revise shortly.
> 
> On Nov 25, 2015 4:58 PM, "Alissa Cooper" <alissa@cooperw.in <mailto:alissa@cooperw.in>> wrote:
> I have reviewed this document in preparation for IETF last call. There are a few edits that need to be made before this document can be last-called:
> 
> 1) The document needs a security considerations section. It is perfectly fine if this section mostly points to the security considerations of the other p2psip documents, but it needs to be there.
> 
> 2) Section 3.5 and Section 7 have text marked as “OPEN ISSUE.” These need to be resolved.
> 
> 3) Section 1 should be deleted.
> 
> 
> While you’re making changes, please address the following:
> 
> 4) Fix the ID nits.
> 
> 5) I think Section 3.5 should reference RFC 6762 and 6763 rather than Bonjour.
> 
> 6) The Wikipedia references in Section 5 and 6 don’t really seem appropriate and don’t add much value, so I would suggest deleting them.
> 
> 7) References to “the RELOAD base draft” should not call it a draft and should reference the RFC.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> Alissa
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