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Re: [P2PSIP] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-p2psip-self-tuning-11

Jouni Mäenpää <jouni.maenpaa@ericsson.com> Sun, 08 June 2014 09:16 UTC

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From: Jouni Mäenpää <jouni.maenpaa@ericsson.com>
To: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>, "p2psip@ietf.org" <p2psip@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [P2PSIP] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-p2psip-self-tuning-11
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Hi,

Thanks for the comments! They have been addressed in the new -12 revision of the draft.

Regards,
Jouni

-----Original Message-----
From: P2PSIP [mailto:p2psip-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Alissa Cooper
Sent: 29. toukokuuta 2014 2:15
To: p2psip@ietf.org
Subject: [P2PSIP] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-p2psip-self-tuning-11

I have reviewed this document in preparation for IETF last call. It’s in good shape and I have issued the last call. Below I have a few comments and questions for you to address together with any last call comments.

Section 6:
"To calculate an appropriate stabilization rate, the
   values of three parameters MUST be estimated: overlay size N, failure
   rate U, and join rate L.”

Seems like s/MUST/must/ is appropriate here — the formula for the stabilization rate is essentially infeasible to calculate unless the implementation estimates these parameters in any event.

Section 6.3:
s/K is set 25%/K is set to 25%/

Section 6.5:
It would be useful to have text here or in Section 7 to motivate the choice of 4 as the default value for number-of-peers-to-probe and to note the implications of using a number smaller than 4.

Section 8:
s/help ensuring/help ensure/

Section 9.1:
s/3/0x3/ (for consistency with the IANA registry)

Thanks,
Alissa


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