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Re: [Pals] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4664 (5644)

"Andrew G. Malis" <agmalis@gmail.com> Mon, 25 February 2019 19:13 UTC

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From: "Andrew G. Malis" <agmalis@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 25 Feb 2019 14:13:26 -0500
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Cc: suresh@kaloom.com, terry.manderson@icann.org, "Giles Heron (giheron)" <giheron@cisco.com>, nmalykh@ieee.org, "l2vpn@ietf.org" <l2vpn@ietf.org>, pals@ietf.org, "BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A (ATTLABS)" <db3546@att.com>, Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu>, Eric C Rosen <erosen@juniper.net>, Nabil Bitar <nbitar40@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Pals] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4664 (5644)
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I agree with this errata; in addition, I would recommend changing the word
"allocate" to "allocating".

Cheers,
Andy


On Mon, Feb 25, 2019 at 9:03 AM RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
wrote:

> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC4664,
> "Framework for Layer 2 Virtual Private Networks (L2VPNs)".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5644
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Nikolai Malykh <nmalykh@ieee.org>
>
> Section: 3.4.3
>
> Original Text
> -------------
>    Relative to the VPLS there are three different possibilities for
>    allocate functions to a device in such a position in the provider
>    network:
>
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    Relative to the VPLS there are two different possibilities for
>    allocate functions to a device in such a position in the provider
>    network:
>
>
> Notes
> -----
>
>
> Instructions:
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>
> --------------------------------------
> RFC4664 (draft-ietf-l2vpn-l2-framework-05)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Framework for Layer 2 Virtual Private Networks
> (L2VPNs)
> Publication Date    : September 2006
> Author(s)           : L. Andersson, Ed., E. Rosen, Ed.
> Category            : INFORMATIONAL
> Source              : Layer 2 Virtual Private Networks INT
> Area                : Internet
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>
>

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