[Pals] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-pals-vpls-pim-snooping-05

Carlos Pignataro <cpignata@cisco.com> Thu, 11 May 2017 03:39 UTC

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From: Carlos Pignataro <cpignata@cisco.com>
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Date: Wed, 10 May 2017 20:39:55 -0700
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Subject: [Pals] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-pals-vpls-pim-snooping-05

Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro
Review result: Has Nits

This is a well written, and comprehensive document.

Only a couple of nits, for the authors consideration:

* In some places, the text uses "Pim" instead of "PIM"
* The Appendices are a bit abruptly integrated. A better description
of what Appendix A is, maybe even a more descriptive title, and the
normative-level of the Appendices would help (even for an
Informational document.)

Thanks,

-- Carlos.

[Pals] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-pals… Carlos Pignataro
Re: [Pals] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-… Andrew G. Malis