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Re: [Pals] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-pals-vpls-pim-snooping-05

"Andrew G. Malis" <agmalis@gmail.com> Tue, 16 May 2017 06:36 UTC

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From: "Andrew G. Malis" <agmalis@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 16 May 2017 14:33:25 +0800
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To: Carlos Pignataro <cpignata@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [Pals] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-pals-vpls-pim-snooping-05
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Carlos,

Thanks for your review!

Cheers,
Andy

On Thu, May 11, 2017 at 11:39 AM, Carlos Pignataro <cpignata@cisco.com>
wrote:

> Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro
> Review result: Has Nits
>
> This is a well written, and comprehensive document.
>
> Only a couple of nits, for the authors consideration:
>
> * In some places, the text uses "Pim" instead of "PIM"
> * The Appendices are a bit abruptly integrated. A better description
> of what Appendix A is, maybe even a more descriptive title, and the
> normative-level of the Appendices would help (even for an
> Informational document.)
>
> Thanks,
>
> -- Carlos.
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