[Pana] RFC 6345 errata

Yoshihiro Ohba <yoshihiro.ohba@toshiba.co.jp> Thu, 13 October 2011 13:50 UTC

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From: Yoshihiro Ohba <yoshihiro.ohba@toshiba.co.jp>
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Subject: [Pana] RFC 6345 errata
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My colleague Tanaka-san found out a potential error in RFC 6345 (PANA
relay).

The following paragraph in Section 2:

"
When the PRE receives the PRY message, it retrieves the PAA-
originated PANA message from the Relayed-Message AVP and the PaC's
IP address and UDP port number from and PaC-Information AVPs.  The
PAA-originated PANA message is sent to the PaC's IP address with
the source UDP port number set to the PANA port number (716) and
the destination UDP port number set to the UDP port number contained
in the Relayed-Message AVP.
"

should read:

"
When the PRE receives the PRY message, it retrieves the PAA-
originated PANA message from the Relayed-Message AVP and the PaC's
IP address and UDP port number from and PaC-Information AVPs.  The
PAA-originated PANA message is sent to the PaC's IP address with
the source UDP port number set to the PANA port number (716) and
the destination UDP port number set to the UDP port number contained
in the PaC-Information AVP.
"

(s/Relayed-Message/PaC-Information/ in the last sentence.)

Regards,
Yoshihiro Ohba