Re: [Pana] RFC 6345 errata

Alper Yegin <alper.yegin@yegin.org> Fri, 14 October 2011 06:03 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Pana] RFC 6345 errata
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that one makes sense too.

On Oct 14, 2011, at 7:17 AM, Yoshihiro Ohba wrote:

> (2011/10/14 0:54), Alper Yegin wrote:
>> Thanks for catching this.
>> I confirm it is a bug and your fix handles it.
> 
> OK.  I will submit errata on this.
> 
> How about a potential typo(?) on RFC 5191 that I submitted a couple of
> months ago for RFC 5191?
> 
> http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/pana/current/msg03473.html
> 
> "
> There is inconsistency about Key-Id data type as follows:
> 
> In Section 5.3, "The Key-Id AVP is of type Unsigned32 ..."
> 
> In Section 8.4, "The Key-Id AVP (AVP Code 4) is of type Integer32 ..."
> 
> The text in Section 8.4 seems incorrect, and should be corrected to:
> "The Key-Id AVP (AVP Code 4) is of type Unsigned32 ..."
> "
> 
> Yoshihiro Ohba
> 
>> 
>> Alper
>> 
>> On Oct 13, 2011, at 4:50 PM, Yoshihiro Ohba wrote:
>> 
>>> My colleague Tanaka-san found out a potential error in RFC 6345 (PANA
>>> relay).
>>> 
>>> The following paragraph in Section 2:
>>> 
>>> "
>>> When the PRE receives the PRY message, it retrieves the PAA-
>>> originated PANA message from the Relayed-Message AVP and the PaC's
>>> IP address and UDP port number from and PaC-Information AVPs.  The
>>> PAA-originated PANA message is sent to the PaC's IP address with
>>> the source UDP port number set to the PANA port number (716) and
>>> the destination UDP port number set to the UDP port number contained
>>> in the Relayed-Message AVP.
>>> "
>>> 
>>> should read:
>>> 
>>> "
>>> When the PRE receives the PRY message, it retrieves the PAA-
>>> originated PANA message from the Relayed-Message AVP and the PaC's
>>> IP address and UDP port number from and PaC-Information AVPs.  The
>>> PAA-originated PANA message is sent to the PaC's IP address with
>>> the source UDP port number set to the PANA port number (716) and
>>> the destination UDP port number set to the UDP port number contained
>>> in the PaC-Information AVP.
>>> "
>>> 
>>> (s/Relayed-Message/PaC-Information/ in the last sentence.)
>>> 
>>> Regards,
>>> Yoshihiro Ohba
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>> 
>> 
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