Re: [PANRG] [irsg] IRSG review request draft-irtf-panrg-questions-07

"Ciavaglia, Laurent" <laurent.ciavaglia@rakuten.com> Fri, 18 June 2021 17:36 UTC

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From: "Ciavaglia, Laurent" <laurent.ciavaglia@rakuten.com>
To: Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com>, Colin Perkins <csp@csperkins.org>
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Subject: Re: [PANRG] [irsg] IRSG review request draft-irtf-panrg-questions-07
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Hello Spencer, Brian, Colin & All,

Please see in-line below for my replies.

Thank you.

Best regards, Laurent

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Subject: Re: [irsg] [PANRG] IRSG review request draft-irtf-panrg-questions-07

Hi, Brian and Laurent,

I am the Worst. Draft. Shepherd. Ever.

My apologies for my Long Winter's Nap, but I just noticed that I haven't seen a response from either Laurent or "the RG chairs" about the changes in -08 (for Laurent's review) and -09, and when Colin said he was waiting for confirmation from "the RG chairs", he might have meant "the draft shepherd, who is usually one of the RG chairs, but not for THIS draft". Assuming so, and now that I'm awake, let's move forward. Please see below.

On Fri, Jan 15, 2021 at 12:21 PM Colin Perkins <csp@csperkins.org<mailto:csp@csperkins.org>> wrote:
Brian, Laurent – thanks!

At this stage, I’ll wait for confirmation from Laurent and the RG chairs that the changes are okay, before proceeding with the IRSG final poll.

 -08 seems, to my eye, to be a significant improvement over -07 - thank you, Laurent - but I saw a couple of suggestions that don't seem to have been translated into the draft yet.

Laurent suggested labeling the questions, for ease of reference (both in the document and in the RG). I like that suggestion. Brian, do you have a thought about this?

Laurent noted that the core topic in section 2.5 seemed to be focused on privacy/protection against pervasive surveillance, and asked if there were other known/foreseen implications for what is now "of Path Awareness for the Transport and Application Layers".I did not see a response or text change here. Brian, is there anything to add?

Laurent, if you could let me/Brian know what you think of the changes in https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-irtf-panrg-questions-09.txt&url1=draft-irtf-panrg-questions-07.txt, almost all of which are in response to your review, that would be AWESOME.
[Ciavaglia, Laurent] I’ve read the latest version (-09) and my comments have been well addressed (thank you). The document is fine to proceed for me.
I remain available if Brian works out a revision for the above points, but I trust he will “Do the right thing” 😉  (credits: Spencer and Spike)

Best,

Spencer