Re: [payload] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8331 (5310)

Thomas Edwards <Thomas.Edwards@fox.com> Thu, 29 March 2018 21:40 UTC

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From: Thomas Edwards <Thomas.Edwards@fox.com>
To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, "payload@ietf.org" <payload@ietf.org>
CC: Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>, Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com>, "Ali C. Begen" <ali.begen@networked.media>, "Roni Even (A)" <roni.even@huawei.com>, "amalizia@matrox.com" <amalizia@matrox.com>
Thread-Topic: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8331 (5310)
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Subject: Re: [payload] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8331 (5310)
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Indeed, I failed in properly adding the two parity bits to the Data_Count in Figure 1!  Anthony is correct.

-Thomas

On 3/28/18, 8:33 AM, "Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:

    Hi Thomas and PAYLOAD participants:
    
    What do you think; is the errata report correct? Seems like it is borderline between editorial and technical.
    
    Thanks!
    
    Ben.
    
    > On Mar 28, 2018, at 9:24 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
    > 
    > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8331,
    > "RTP Payload for Society of Motion Picture and Television Engineers (SMPTE) ST 291-1 Ancillary Data".
    > 
    > --------------------------------------
    > You may review the report below and at:
    > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5310
    > 
    > --------------------------------------
    > Type: Editorial
    > Reported by: Anthony Malizia <amalizia@matrox.com>
    > 
    > Section: 2, Figure 1
    > 
    > Original Text
    > -------------
    > Data_Count=0x84
    > 
    > Data_Count-0x105
    > 
    > Corrected Text
    > --------------
    > Data_Count=0x104
    > 
    > Data_Count-0x205
    > 
    > Notes
    > -----
    > In the example described in section 2, the first ANC packet is said to have 4 User_Data_Words, and the second packet is said to have 5 User_Data_Words.  The values in Figure 1 for the Data_Count fields do not have the correct parity bits according to the definition of Data_Count described in section 2.1.
    > 
    > 4 = 0b0000'0100, with parity bits 0b01'0000'0100 = 0x104
    > 
    > 5 = 0b0000'0101, with parity bits 0b10'0000'0101 = 0x205
    > 
    > Instructions:
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    > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
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    > 
    > --------------------------------------
    > RFC8331 (draft-ietf-payload-rtp-ancillary-14)
    > --------------------------------------
    > Title               : RTP Payload for Society of Motion Picture and Television Engineers (SMPTE) ST 291-1 Ancillary Data
    > Publication Date    : February 2018
    > Author(s)           : T. Edwards
    > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
    > Source              : Audio/Video Transport Payloads
    > Area                : Applications and Real-Time
    > Stream              : IETF
    > Verifying Party     : IESG