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Re: [payload] WGLC on draft-ietf-payload-tetra-00

"Dave Satterlee (Vocal)" <Dave.Satterlee@vocal.com> Mon, 25 June 2018 15:20 UTC

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Subject: Re: [payload] WGLC on draft-ietf-payload-tetra-00
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Review Comments for:
 
 RTP Payload Format for the TETRA Audio Codec
 draft-ietf-payload-tetra-00
 
June 25, 2018 by
David Satterlee
David.Satterlee@vocal.com
 
The draft appears to be generally well specified and useful.
 
Review Comments:

In section 1 (Introduction) the document says "The payload format supports transmission of
multiple channels..." . It is unclear to me what this means, and where it is specified in
the draft.

There are a number of non-technical issues (grammatical etc.).  I believe type of review
is for a later stage, but I can make some recommendations on that aspect as well if needed.

 
Regards,
Dave Satterlee
VOCAL Technologies



On 6/19/2018 1:17 AM, Roni Even (A) wrote:
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> WG,
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> We are starting WGLC for https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-payload-tetra-00 .
> Please review the draft and send your comments to the list by July 10^th . If you read
> the draft but you have no comments, say so as well.
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> There were already some comments on the mailing list and we can consider them as part of
> the WGLC comments
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> Roni Even (A) Payload WG co-chair
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