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Re: [payload] draft-ietf-payload-rtp-aptx-04

"Ali C. Begen (abegen)" <abegen@cisco.com> Tue, 05 November 2013 18:57 UTC

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From: "Ali C. Begen (abegen)" <abegen@cisco.com>
To: John Lindsay <Lindsay@worldcastsystems.com>
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Subject: Re: [payload] draft-ietf-payload-rtp-aptx-04
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The revision looks good, I submitted the write-up to the IESG. Please wait for the IESG review and a green light before the AD before submitting a new version.

Thanks.


On Nov 5, 2013, at 7:09 AM, John Lindsay <Lindsay@worldcastsystems.com> wrote:

> Hi 
> 
> A new doc has been submitted which address the issues raised below.
> 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-payload-rtp-aptx/
> 
> If you spot any other issues please let me know.
> 
> Regards
> 
> John
> 
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: payload-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:payload-bounces@ietf.org] On
> Behalf Of Ali C. Begen (abegen)
> Sent: 22 October 2013 18:31
> To: John Lindsay
> Cc: <payload@ietf.org>; <draft-ietf-payload-rtp-aptx@tools.ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: [payload] Review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-aptx-02
> 
> John,
> 
> A few errors still exist (I dont think these are showstoppers but IESG
> tends to be picky about these when the document is shipped w/o fixing
> them).
> 
>> 1) The registration in Section 6.1 uses the old template. 
>> The current template is here:
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6838#section-5.6
>>> Updated please ensure you agree
> 
> You forgot the following item (insert it based on the template):
> Fragment identifier considerations: None
> 
>> 5) Regarding the encoding considerations: This should say "framed". 
>>>>> Don't understand issue? Can you give further explanation?
> 
> Encoding considerations: This media type is framed in RTP and contains
> binary data; see Section 4.8 of [RFC6838].
> 
>> 6) "Restrictions on usage" field can say "RTP applications only".
>>> Not sure what is meant by this?
>>> Changed Intended usage: RTP applications only at the bottom of page
> 14?
>> Can you ensure you agree?
> 
> Intended usage: COMMON
> Restrictions on usage: This media type depends on RTP framing, and hence
> is only defined for transfer via RTP [RFC3550].
> 
>> 
>> 7) Person & email address to contact for further information: This 
>> should be "John Lindsay email:lindsay@worldcastsystems.com"
>>> Again cannot see the issue? Is this supposed to be in quotes?
>>> Changed to quotes but not 100% sure this was the issue?
>>> Person & email address to contact for further information: "John 
>>> Lindsay email:lindsay@worldcastsystems.com"
> 
> I am sorry. Please remove the quotes. I thought the email was missing.
> 
> The submission is now closed but will open in two weeks. Please update
> the draft at that time.
> 
> Thanks,
> -acbegen
> 
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