Re: [payload] [Errata Verified] RFC8331 (5310)

John Fletcher <John.Fletcher@bbc.co.uk> Tue, 03 April 2018 22:24 UTC

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From: John Fletcher <John.Fletcher@bbc.co.uk>
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Subject: Re: [payload] [Errata Verified] RFC8331 (5310)
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That looks good to me.
John
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Subject: Re: [payload] [Errata Verified] RFC8331 (5310)

Thanks, John.

Please review and let me know if any further updates are required.

RFC Editor/mf

On Apr 3, 2018, at 3:15 PM, John Fletcher <john.fletcher@bbc.co.uk> wrote:

> The report of the origimal text also has hyphen instead of equals, which is incorrect.
>
> John Fletcher
> ________________________________________
> From: Megan Ferguson [mferguson@amsl.com]
> Sent: 03 April 2018 23:02
> To: amalizia; Ben Campbell
> Cc: John Fletcher; RFC System; thomas.edwards@fox.com; iesg@ietf.org; payload@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [payload] [Errata Verified] RFC8331 (5310)
>
> Greetings,
>
> We believe we have updated as requested.  Please review the report and let us know if any further changes are necessary.
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> *Ben - As verifier, please review and let us know any objections.
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> Thank you.
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> On Apr 3, 2018, at 11:07 AM, amalizia <amalizia@matrox.com> wrote:
>
>> Oops, sorry about that.
>>
>> Yes, I meant to write "Data_Count=0x205" (with the equals sign).
>>
>> Can I correct it, or is it out of my hands now?
>>
>> On 2018-04-03 1:08 PM, John Fletcher wrote:
>>> The errata report says corrected text should be "Data_Count-0x205" but it should be "Data_Count=0x205" (equals sign not hyphen).
>>>
>>> Can this be corrected?
>>>
>>> John Fletcher
>>> ________________________________________
>>> From: payload [payload-bounces@ietf.org] on behalf of RFC Errata System [rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org]
>>> Sent: 29 March 2018 22:55
>>> To: amalizia@matrox.com; thomas.edwards@fox.com
>>> Cc: iesg@ietf.org; payload@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
>>> Subject: [payload] [Errata Verified] RFC8331 (5310)
>>>
>>> The following errata report has been verified for RFC8331,
>>> "RTP Payload for Society of Motion Picture and Television Engineers (SMPTE) ST 291-1 Ancillary Data".
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> You may review the report below and at:
>>> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5310
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> Status: Verified
>>> Type: Editorial
>>>
>>> Reported by: Anthony Malizia <amalizia@matrox.com>
>>> Date Reported: 2018-03-28
>>> Verified by: Ben Campbell (IESG)
>>>
>>> Section: 2, Figure 1
>>>
>>> Original Text
>>> -------------
>>> Data_Count=0x84
>>>
>>> Data_Count-0x105
>>>
>>> Corrected Text
>>> --------------
>>> Data_Count=0x104
>>>
>>> Data_Count-0x205
>>>
>>> Notes
>>> -----
>>> In the example described in section 2, the first ANC packet is said to have 4 User_Data_Words, and the second packet is said to have 5 User_Data_Words.  The values in Figure 1 for the Data_Count fields do not have the correct parity bits according to the definition of Data_Count described in section 2.1.
>>>
>>> 4 = 0b0000'0100, with parity bits 0b01'0000'0100 = 0x104
>>>
>>> 5 = 0b0000'0101, with parity bits 0b10'0000'0101 = 0x205
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> RFC8331 (draft-ietf-payload-rtp-ancillary-14)
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> Title               : RTP Payload for Society of Motion Picture and Television Engineers (SMPTE) ST 291-1 Ancillary Data
>>> Publication Date    : February 2018
>>> Author(s)           : T. Edwards
>>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>>> Source              : Audio/Video Transport Payloads
>>> Area                : Applications and Real-Time
>>> Stream              : IETF
>>> Verifying Party     : IESG
>>>
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