[payload] draft-ietf-payload-rtp-aptx-04
"John Lindsay" <Lindsay@worldcastsystems.com> Tue, 05 November 2013 15:10 UTC
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From: John Lindsay <Lindsay@worldcastsystems.com>
To: "Ali C. Begen (abegen)" <abegen@cisco.com>
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Subject: [payload] draft-ietf-payload-rtp-aptx-04
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Hi A new doc has been submitted which address the issues raised below. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-payload-rtp-aptx/ If you spot any other issues please let me know. Regards John -----Original Message----- From: payload-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:payload-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Ali C. Begen (abegen) Sent: 22 October 2013 18:31 To: John Lindsay Cc: <payload@ietf.org>; <draft-ietf-payload-rtp-aptx@tools.ietf.org> Subject: Re: [payload] Review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-aptx-02 John, A few errors still exist (I dont think these are showstoppers but IESG tends to be picky about these when the document is shipped w/o fixing them). > 1) The registration in Section 6.1 uses the old template. > The current template is here: > http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6838#section-5.6 >> Updated please ensure you agree You forgot the following item (insert it based on the template): Fragment identifier considerations: None > 5) Regarding the encoding considerations: This should say "framed". >>>> Don't understand issue? Can you give further explanation? Encoding considerations: This media type is framed in RTP and contains binary data; see Section 4.8 of [RFC6838]. > 6) "Restrictions on usage" field can say "RTP applications only". >> Not sure what is meant by this? >> Changed Intended usage: RTP applications only at the bottom of page 14? > Can you ensure you agree? Intended usage: COMMON Restrictions on usage: This media type depends on RTP framing, and hence is only defined for transfer via RTP [RFC3550]. > > 7) Person & email address to contact for further information: This > should be "John Lindsay email:lindsay@worldcastsystems.com" >> Again cannot see the issue? Is this supposed to be in quotes? >> Changed to quotes but not 100% sure this was the issue? >> Person & email address to contact for further information: "John >> Lindsay email:lindsay@worldcastsystems.com" I am sorry. Please remove the quotes. I thought the email was missing. The submission is now closed but will open in two weeks. Please update the draft at that time. Thanks, -acbegen _______________________________________________ payload mailing list payload@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/payload
- [payload] draft-ietf-payload-rtp-aptx-04 John Lindsay
- Re: [payload] draft-ietf-payload-rtp-aptx-04 Ali C. Begen (abegen)