Re: [payload] Pos-Dir last call review for draft-ietf-payload-rtp-vc2hq-05
"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sat, 12 May 2018 05:22 UTC
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From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
To: 'Nevil Brownlee' <n.brownlee@auckland.ac.nz>, ops-dir@ietf.org, draft-ietf-payload-rtp-vc2hq.all@ietf.org, payload@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [payload] Pos-Dir last call review for draft-ietf-payload-rtp-vc2hq-05
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Hi, Thanks for the review About section 4.1. The pt number is negotiated in the signaling , for example using SDP see section 6.2. This is how it works for all payload type numbers who are dynamically allocated m=video 30000 RTP/AVP 112 a=rtpmap:112 vc2/90000 a=fmtp:112 profile=HQ;version=3;level=0 the pt = 122 and it is mapped to vc2 Roni Even > -----Original Message----- > From: payload [mailto:payload-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Nevil Brownlee > Sent: Saturday, May 12, 2018 5:55 AM > To: ops-dir@ietf.org; draft-ietf-payload-rtp-vc2hq.all@ietf.org; > payload@ietf.org > Subject: [payload] Pos-Dir last call review for draft-ietf-payload-rtp-vc2hq-05 > > > Reviewer: Nevil Brownlee > Review Result: Ready > > I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing > effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. > These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational > aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be > included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG > chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. > > "This memo describes an RTP Payload format for the High Quality (HQ) > profile of SMPTE Standard ST 2042-1 known as VC-2. This document > describes the transport of HQ Profile VC-2 in RTP packets and has > applications for low-complexity, high-bandwidth streaming of both > lossless and lossy compressed video." > > This draft simply describes in detail the way in which a stream of VC-2 > information must be carried ina stream of RTP packets. It's well-written, with > sufficient detail to allow for inter-operating implementations. > It's Security Considerations are clear. As with all documents of this kind, > operators will need to be sure that the implementations of this kind of RTP > stream do conform to this draft's eventual RFC. > > I noticed a few slightly puzzling things: > > Section 4.1 Payload Type says that the PT is "A dynamically allocated > payload type field that designates the payload as VC-2 coded video." > Given that it's dynamically allocated, how does a VC-2 receiver know > what value has been allocated for PT? > > Section 4.4 has two lists of acceptable Parse Code values. but those > sentences end with 'and'. Should that really be 'or', indicating > that any of the listed values of allowed? > > Cheers, Nevil > > -- > -------------------------------------------------- > Nevil Brownlee Computer Science Department | ITS > Phone: +64 9 373 7599 x88941 The University of Auckland > FAX: +64 9 373 7453 Private Bag 92019, Auckland 1142, New Zealand > > _______________________________________________ > payload mailing list > payload@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/payload
- [payload] Pos-Dir last call review for draft-ietf… Nevil Brownlee
- Re: [payload] Pos-Dir last call review for draft-… Roni Even