[Pce] Lars Eggert's No Objection on charter-ietf-pce-07-04: (with COMMENT)

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Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-pce-07-04: No Objection

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# GEN AD review of charter-ietf-pce-07-04

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## Comments

### Inclusive language

Found terminology that should be reviewed for inclusivity; see
https://www.rfc-editor.org/part2/#inclusive_language for background and more
guidance:

 * Term `native`; alternatives might be `built-in`, `fundamental`, `ingrained`,
   `intrinsic`, `original`

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