Re: [Pce] WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-vn-association-05

[Dhruv Dhody <[e-mail]>]

Hi Ramon,

On Mon, Mar 14, 2022 at 2:31 PM Ramon Casellas <[e-mail]>
wrote:

> Dear all,
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> I read the draft and I think it’s ready for publication.
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> My only minor comment is that I was confused by the sentence “This
> document defines one mandatory TLV "VIRTUAL-NETWORK-TLV" and one
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>    new optional TLV "VENDOR-INFORMATION-TLV”. Later on , the reference to
> RFC7470 is provided.
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> I believe the intent is to state that the latter can be used (optional)
> but no further guidelines are given in this regard. It is slightly
> redundant but  it does not hurt I guess.
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> Alternatively, it would be beneficial to state what other information can
> be provided in the VENDOR-INFORMATION-TLV (my personal opinion is to try to
> avoid those)
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I think this could be more clearly stated as -

OLD
   This document defines one mandatory TLV "VIRTUAL-NETWORK-TLV" and one
   new optional TLV "VENDOR-INFORMATION-TLV"; apart from this TLV,
   VENDOR-INFORMATION-TLV can be used to carry arbitrary vendor specific
   information.

   o  VIRTUAL-NETWORK-TLV: Used to communicate the VN Identifier.

   o  VENDOR-INFORMATION-TLV: Used to communicate arbitrary vendor
      specific behavioral information, described in [RFC7470].

NEW
  This document defines one new mandatory TLV "VIRTUAL-NETWORK-TLV";
   apart from this TLV, the existing VENDOR-INFORMATION-TLV [RFC7470]
   can be optionally used as described below:

   o  VIRTUAL-NETWORK-TLV: Used to communicate the VN Name.

   o  VENDOR-INFORMATION-TLV: Used to communicate arbitrary vendor
      specific behavioral information, described in [RFC7470].
END

The VIRTUAL-NETWORK-TLV is used for VN Name only and any other
vendor-specific info goes in VENDOR-INFORMATION-TLV. Does this work for
you?

Thanks!
Dhruv



> Regards
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> *From:* Pce <[e-mail]> *On Behalf Of *Dhruv Dhody
> *Sent:* lunes, 14 de marzo de 2022 9:40
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> *Subject:* Re: [Pce] WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-vn-association-05
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> Hi WG,
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> The WGLC ends on Wednesday 16th March. The I-D is NOT long, please
> review/respond to the list.
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> Thanks!
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> Dhruv
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> On Tue, Feb 22, 2022 at 6:02 PM Dhruv Dhody <[e-mail]> wrote:
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> Looks like the chairs had a "collision" in sending out the WGLC notice!
> Apologies! :)
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> The only parameter that was different was when the WGLC ends, and let's
> pick the larger of the two dates i.e.  WGLC will end on March 16, 2022.
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> Thanks!
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> Dhruv
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> On Tue, Feb 22, 2022 at 5:48 PM Dhruv Dhody <[e-mail]> wrote:
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> Hi WG,
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> This email starts a 3-weeks working group last call for
> draft-ietf-pce-vn-association-05 [1
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-vn-association/>] to
> accommodate the upcoming draft submission deadline.
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> Please indicate your support or concern for this draft. If you are opposed
> to the progression of the draft to RFC, please articulate your concern. If
> you support it, please indicate that you have read the latest version and
> it is ready for publication in your opinion. As always, review comments and
> nits are most welcome.
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> The WG LC will end on Tuesday 15th March 2022.
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> A general reminder to the WG to be more vocal during the
> last-call/adoption and help us unclog our queues :)
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> Thanks,
> Dhruv & Julien
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> [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-vn-association/
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