[Pce] Shepherd's Review of draft-ietf-pce-vn-association

[Hariharan Ananthakrishnan <[e-mail]>]

Hi Authors,

Thank you for your work on this document. I have completed my Shepherd's
review.

Minor:
The document mixes VN and customer in many places. In the introduction we
make it clear that "A VN is a customer view of the TE network", that should
set the context. I would suggest removing the mixed use of VN and customer.

1. Introduction
s/ Virtual Network (VN) (or customer) / Virtual Network (VN)/

3. Operation Overview
s/belonging to a VN\/customer/belonging to a VN/

s/to the same VN or customer/to the same VN/

Nits:
Title:
s/Path Computation Element communication Protocol/Path Computation Element
Communication Protocol/
s/Establishing Relationships/establishing relationships/
s/Label Switching Paths/Label Switched Paths/

Abstract:
s/Label Switching Paths/Label Switched Paths/
s/virtual network (VN)/Virtual Network (VN)/

1. Introduction:
s/Path Computation Element communication Protocol/Path Computation Element
Communication Protocol/
s/Path Computation Clients '(PCCs)/Path Computation Clients (PCCs)/
s/Label Switching Paths (LSPs)/Label Switched Paths (LSPs)/

3. Operation Overview
s/VN Association Type in an Operator-Configured/VN Association Type (TBD1)
in an Operator-Configured/

4. Extensions to PCEP
s/The Virtual Netowrk Identifier/The Virtual Network Identifier/


Thanks,
Hari