[Pce] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-auto-bandwidth-10

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 28 August 2019 01:58 UTC

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Reviewer: Erik Kline
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-auto-bandwidth-10
Reviewer: Erik Kline
Review Date: 2019-08-27
IETF LC End Date: 2019-08-28
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

Gentle reminder for the authors to double-check all the lower case "should"s,
"required"s, and "must not"s (etc) to make sure it's not important that they be
capitalized (since the case-sensitive requirements text is referenced).

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

There are some periodic grammatical changes that I think would be nice, but I
assume that can get sorted out with the RFC editor.

Two random things I'll note:

Section 1> I can't find "Path Control Element" in RFC 5440. Should this be
"Path Computation Element"?

Section 5.2>
    .  s/speaker wish to disable/speaker wishes to disable/
    .  s/of same type/of the same type/