[Pce] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-pce-07-04: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 14 December 2023 10:19 UTC

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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-pce-07-04: No Objection

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After re-reading the proposed charter for the n+1 time, some more comments:

1) the first paragraph would benefit by directly stating that it is about MPLS,
SR, BIER, Detnet... rather than adding a 2nd sentence "Further, the PCE WG ...."

2) in the same vein, the 2nd paragraph is only about (G)MPLS with terms like
LSR and LSP.

3) in the last two bullets: what is the difference between "in cooperation" and
"in *close* cooperation" ?

4) as written in my previous review, it would be clearer if the work items are
directly qualified with 'standard tracks' or if 'specification' was used rather
than 'definition'